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Never ever put a vanishing point in to the center of your composition!!!!!!! (only if you know what are you doing)
Never ever put a vanishing point in to the center of your composition!!!!!!! (only if you know what are you doing)
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Hey man, first off I wanna say I've been a bigbig (had to do it) fan of your's since your birth on this website and I "enjoy" all your work to the fullest capacity. You're in my top five son and I want to know how much you charge for commissions.
Ok, so to the critique. Off the top of my head I believe this is first time you've done rain in this style. The rain makes everything else POP, but not in the best way. When looking at the parts where there's light and where there's none it really makes me feel like the forecast was light showers throughout the night. But on the other parts it looks like you just faded out the color; like on the girl's ass and some of the bus.
The torn up building is cool, but why the fuck is that there? I'm guessing she was running after that busty girl or something. The texture of the rubble doesn't click with the rest of the building because it's too soft; the building looks more rigid than it. Also it seems as if it was just put there, not torn down. Basically it looks a little photo shopped.
The people on top of the other building reaching their hand out for her is something different as opposed to the usual pleading, shock, or arousal. I can actually feel the fear of the people at the end of the block because of the poses you put them in.
Overall: This image does have a story to it, but it's short; Your textures on the broken building are off; The lighting and the rain are on point; The rain needs to look more like rain; The scene is a little frightening. The style you were using is (I don't know the exact word) more paint/ink which works, but not the way that I feel fits you. Don't get me wrong if Bob Ross painted vore i feel like this is what it would look like, but I'm iffy on you doing this particular type since all of your shit looks straight out of a Jeph Loeb comic.